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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Searching

    Okay. All of this was good EXCEPT the word "nice." It almost made me groan. It just doesn't fit, and mars the serious tone. Surely you can think of some ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wings of Concrete

    Whoa. This is...good. I absolutely love the title. It is very evocative, and makes me think of a statue of a fallen angel lost amid the skyscrapers of a city. ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Roses Are Red

    Haha! This poem made me smile, despite the fact that it is rather sad. It was light, cute, and slightly cheeky; it reminded me of Owl City's songs. You might ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lightning

    Well, brief, first of all. It wasn't exactly pure genius, but it was good. Is he so sure anger doesn't make noise? When I'm angry I make a WHOLE lot ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Wandering

    Well, congratulations, love. You have successfully earned my admiration. I could feel the pain and despair in this poem. The format was very untraditional, but I think that helped rather ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: There's no such thing as a perfect moment

    Um...okay. This was definitely what diplomats such as myself like to call an "indie" poem. Very...*cough*...unusual. I am of the opinion that there IS such a thing as a perfect ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: One Night Only

    Ah, the teen years....yes, I have been in a situation like the one described....good times, good times. The poem (if I may call it so?) is somewhat disjointed, as if ...

    Jul 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Love

    Ello there, sweet. I see you have joined the brave band of poets throughout history who have dared to write about the great mystery they call Love. Actually, I must ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Calling All Heroes

    Oh my gosh, that was a beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind, the boy smoking, the girl sitting alone on the pier. I know how it feels, ...

    Oct 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Simple Black Dress

    Wow, that was actually pretty good, pretty powerful. The poetry is simple but profound, and painfully emotional. Now I must say I have a couple of nitpicks. They are not ...

    Oct 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Storm

    Yay i like this poem!! It is STORMY, lol. You know, i wrote a poem about a storm too. This is good, though i must admit i didn't completely understand ...

    Oct 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted

    This is a good poem, expressive, contemplative, and a little painful too. The fact is, I can relate because in many ways, I am that girl in the dark-colored clothes, ...

    Oct 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Waking Up (in Apartment 5C)

    NOOOOO!!! This poem made me sad. (technically it's really not that hard to make me sad, but whatever.) I know how that feels, when all the hopes and dreams come ...

    Sep 18, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Words of a Conceited Man

    Haha this poem was funny. I know because my brother talks like that all the time, albeit as a joke. Overall I can't say I really get the point of ...

    Sep 18, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Genetics

    I feel you, sister! Everyone always tell me I look exactly like my mom and talk exactly like my dad, and it drives me insane. I don't want to be ...

    Sep 4, 2009


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